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Circuit Vertigo

Napisany przez Szumixx, 13-09-2022, 09:04
Circuit Vertigo

Offline Szumixx

#1
(map name): Vertigo

(location): Countryside

(author): Szumixx3390

(map showcase): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1nTfYA_pbmI


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Offline WildPotato

#2
0/10 Not enough rocks
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Offline kayra999

#3
Okay so let me tell you the common mistake of new map makers.Spamming one object trough out the whole map which makes it look meh.I will stay point out places tho.

0.06 - 0.13 you seriously dont need everywhere to be rocks you can use you desert theme for left side like cactuses and a lot of bushes or trees.Right side is fine since it already was kinda mountain.

0.15 For U turn use some kind of emergency service.Since that road usually goes full ahead a rock formation there means something is wrong so you have to show there is like police - firetrucks or some car showing the road was closed by a rock.Not the rock just spawned out of nowhere.

0.24 - 0.28 This is a personal one I don't like using arrow walls if you can do better things.Like the roadbarriers on some places of the map it can be greater looking.

0.34 - 0.37 you seriously dont need rocks on the right side here.

0.40 try smoothering up that turn by like removing that sign and making the barriers more curved or just make it full 90 degree turn

Overall - Not a bad idea of map it just loses from spam of the rocks it has improvement slots to make.Everyone starts from somewhere buddy keep up
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Offline Szumixx

#4
(13-09-2022, 12:14)kayra999 Wrote: Okay so let me tell you the common mistake of new map makers.Spamming one object trough out the whole map which makes it look meh.I will stay point out places tho.

0.06 - 0.13 you seriously dont need everywhere to be rocks you can use you desert theme for left side like cactuses and a lot of bushes or trees.Right side is fine since it already was kinda mountain.

0.15 For U turn use some kind of emergency service.Since that road usually goes full ahead a rock formation there means something is wrong so you have to show there is like police - firetrucks or some car showing the road was closed by a rock.Not the rock just spawned out of nowhere.

0.24 - 0.28 This is a personal one I don't like using arrow walls if you can do better things.Like the roadbarriers on some places of the map it can be greater looking.

0.34 - 0.37 you seriously dont need rocks on the right side here.

0.40 try smoothering up that turn by like removing that sign and making the barriers more curved or just make it full 90 degree turn

Overall - Not a bad idea of map it just loses from spam of the rocks it has improvement slots to make.Everyone starts from somewhere buddy keep up

Thanks for suggestions. I'm going to make changes and show it.

I've made a few changes, here they are:

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